Thursday, August 2, 2012

Part 6

By Rachel S

They had only got to the car and argued their way when Herbert walked up.
" Whats going on?" Herbert asked.
Dot whirled around.
" Herbert! you scared me! what are you doing here?" She asked.
Avoiding the question. Tip stepped up.
" She wants to track down the person who kidnapped Vicky, I'm glad you here Herbert, I'll be going," He said.
As Tip was about to Cross the street, Herbert stopped him and whirled him around to face him.
" No one is going anywhere, we're all going to keep calm and talk it over," He said.

Dot starred at him.
" But Herbert!" She exclaimed.
She was close to tears with urgancy.
" What'll we do?" She asked in a weak voice.
Herbert opened the car door and lead them in.
" We'll go to a coffee shop and talk to a police officer," He said.

They arrived at a bustling coffee shop, sitting down at the counter, they ordered some coffee and sweet buns. Herbert excused himself to use the phone.


to be continued...


2 comments:

  1. oooo yay, a next part! :D Can't wait to see what happens!!

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  2. Love it!
    P.S. the pic of Dot is gorgeous!

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