By Rachel S
Tip motioned for Dot to stay and emerged out slowly from behind the trash cans, with the hand gun in his hand.
" Hold it!" He said.
Pointing the gun at them. Turning around, the two men saw a lanky teenager, or what looked like one. Vicky's lightened up as she saw him.
problem was; what to do next?
" Slowly now, let go of the lady, and face the wall," He said.
The two obeyed, as Dot ran into the bakery, by the back. The clerk looked up.
" You again?" He asked.
She swallowed hard, breathing hard.
" Can I use your phone? something-" She stopped.
He looked shifty eyed at her, like a sly snake.
" Whats going on here? it seems like soemthings going on," He said.
Dot eyed a telaphone by the front and she hurried to it without saying anything further, picking it up she dialed emergancy.
" Theirs kidnappers outside Jensen's bakery-" She was cut short by a hand that went over her mouth, she bit it, and pushed the man away, it was the clerk! Her heart raced. what was she going to do know?
Wednesday, September 26, 2012
Monday, September 17, 2012
Vanished, Part 11
Vanished Part 11, By Kathryn
Dot's voice faded as the man came nearer. He looked around, his dark beady eyes darting back and forth.
Suddenly, Tip and Dot heard a piercing scream.
"You let go of me!" Someone yelled. Around the corner of an old brick building came two big men. Their arms were marked with bright tattoos and they wore red caps on their heads. In between them, fighting desperately, was none other than Victoria Appleton.
"Stop squirmin', lady!" One of the men said. The beady-eyed man in the tweed suit hurried over.
"Put her in the back of the truck. Tie her hands and gag her so she won't make any noise," he ordered.
Dot winced as they threw Vicky roughly into the old bread truck. They had to get her out of there! But how could they?
Suddenly Dot remembered her gun. She quietly opened the flap of her small handbag, and pulled out the shiny, black pistol. She nudged Tip and showed him the gun. His big brown eyes lighted up. Maybe they could do this.
Saturday, September 8, 2012
vanished part 10
by Rachel S
As Dot peered down the alley looking for suspicious people, the words of Herbert rang in her ears about not going down by Jensen's bakery.
And suddenly she knew why, someones hand went over her mouth and a strong grip took her hands, fear paralyzed her. She was sunk, she was caught now what?
She thought her life was over, what was going to happen next? her hand gun was in her purse that she was holding.
She feared the person could hear her heart beating wildly.
With a strong hand, the person turned her around to face him. She gasped. It was Tip.
What was he doing here?
" What are you doing here? you nearly gave me a heart attack," She hissed.
Tip's ears perked up and he placed a hand over her mouth.
" Shh," All he said.
Her eyes bulged trying to look around to see why Tip had said that so sudden.
He hurried her by some trash cans and ducked down, slowly peering out. Dot saw why, a bread truck was backing up slowly to the back entrance, with the engine still running, the driver got out and Dot stifled a gasp.
It was a tall man in a tweed suit walking slowly to the bakery.
" Tip- do you suppose?.." She said in a wisper.
As Dot peered down the alley looking for suspicious people, the words of Herbert rang in her ears about not going down by Jensen's bakery.
And suddenly she knew why, someones hand went over her mouth and a strong grip took her hands, fear paralyzed her. She was sunk, she was caught now what?
She thought her life was over, what was going to happen next? her hand gun was in her purse that she was holding.
She feared the person could hear her heart beating wildly.
With a strong hand, the person turned her around to face him. She gasped. It was Tip.
What was he doing here?
" What are you doing here? you nearly gave me a heart attack," She hissed.
Tip's ears perked up and he placed a hand over her mouth.
" Shh," All he said.
Her eyes bulged trying to look around to see why Tip had said that so sudden.
He hurried her by some trash cans and ducked down, slowly peering out. Dot saw why, a bread truck was backing up slowly to the back entrance, with the engine still running, the driver got out and Dot stifled a gasp.
It was a tall man in a tweed suit walking slowly to the bakery.
" Tip- do you suppose?.." She said in a wisper.
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