Saturday, September 8, 2012

vanished part 10

by Rachel S

As Dot peered down the alley looking for suspicious people, the words of Herbert rang in her ears about not going down by Jensen's bakery.

And suddenly she knew why, someones hand went over her mouth and a strong grip took her hands, fear paralyzed her. She was sunk, she was caught now what?

She thought her life was over, what was going to happen next? her hand gun was in her purse that she was holding.

She feared the person could hear her heart beating wildly.

With a strong hand, the person turned her around to face him. She gasped. It was Tip.

What was he doing here?

" What are you doing here? you nearly gave me a heart attack," She hissed.

Tip's ears perked up and he placed a hand over her mouth.

" Shh," All he said.
Her eyes bulged trying to look around to see why Tip had said that so sudden.

He hurried her by some trash cans and ducked down, slowly peering out. Dot saw why, a bread truck was backing up slowly to the back entrance, with the engine still running, the driver got out and Dot stifled a gasp.
It was a tall man in a tweed suit walking slowly to the bakery.

" Tip- do you suppose?.." She said in a wisper.

1 comment:

  1. EEK!!!!!! Amazing, Ray!! Simply amazing! I can't wait to write the next part :D
    I like how you used the picture too!

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