Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Vanished part 12

By Rachel S

Tip motioned for Dot to stay and emerged out slowly from behind the trash cans, with the hand gun in his hand.

" Hold it!" He said.

Pointing the gun at them. Turning around, the two men saw a lanky teenager, or what looked like one. Vicky's lightened up as she saw him.

problem was; what to do next?

" Slowly now, let go of the lady, and face the wall," He said.

The two obeyed, as Dot ran into the bakery, by the back. The clerk looked up.

" You again?" He asked.
She swallowed hard, breathing hard.
" Can I use your phone? something-" She stopped.

He looked shifty eyed at her, like a sly snake.
" Whats going on here? it seems like soemthings going on," He said.

Dot eyed a telaphone by the front and she hurried to it without saying anything further, picking it up she dialed emergancy.

" Theirs kidnappers outside Jensen's bakery-" She was cut short by a hand that went over her mouth, she bit it, and pushed the man away, it was the clerk! Her heart raced. what was she going to do know?




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