Thursday, August 23, 2012

Vanished part 8

Written by Rachel S

Tip stood in dismay as he watched Dot disapear in the cab. Flagging down another taxi, a yellow cab pulled up.

" Sir, please follow that taxi, its headed to Jensen's bakery," He said.

The chauffeur looked back astonished, he had heard it was dangrous there, why would a young man like him want to go there?

" Are you sure?" He asked.

" Look! my sister's headed for there, I need to follow her at a distance, I don't want her to disapear," he said.

The cab driver nodded, and drove a ways after the cab, headed to danger.

When the Cab pulled up to the bakery, Dot thanked the chauffeur and getting out she looked around, it was a windy place in the city, a bit of rubbish and newspapers fluttered by.

Her heart kinda skipped a beat as she saw a rat run by. She saw the broken down looking bakery, ciggerette butts lay scattered along the side walk.

adjusting her hair, she walked in in the bakery. the bell on the door jingled as she did.

---- to be continued.

3 comments:

  1. Awesome next part--I like how you made it suspenseful! Leaves me hanging! :D
    Great part!

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    Emma

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