Sunday, June 10, 2012

Part 7

part 7 by Rachel S



Freddie caughed as he breathed a cool breath of air. Taking Dot's hand, they ran as fast as they could , Clint and Craig and Babe were trying to put the fire out.
" Stop!" A guard said.
Taking him off gaurd, Freddie pushed him out of the way, and they dashed through the tropical trees. the trees whipped their faces, tears sprung in Dot's eyes as it smarted her eyes. She tried to slow, but Freddie had a grasp on her to get away. Babe  ran after them calling them to come back.

Adreniline pumped through their veins, They jumped in a thicket, lying on their stomaches, panting, as they heard the people approach.

Freddie placed a hand over Dot's  mouth so they wouldn't make a sound as they were hidden in the bush.

They waited tensely as they heard them walk around, murmering words.  Freddie placed a finger to his lips, wispered to make a dash for it when he said the word
" Get me then,"

He popped up, through the bushes seeing the men's backs to him, looking around. Dot  stood up soundlessly, as she crept to the edge of the thicket ready for the signal.

The guards, hearing a crunch, wirled around, seeing Freddie, they starred.
" Get back to camp!" Craig said, his face was kinda smudged with soot.
Freddie stepped backwards.
" Get me then!" He said.
Dot, looking each other, dashed off, as the the gang was occupied with Freddie, as he ran the other way.

Dot,  found their way the beach, and collasped on the sand, panting. She looked up, to see a shadow, and she saw a native with a spear! She sprang up scared...


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