Friday, April 20, 2012

part 2


The train chugged into the night. Tip said goodnight and and they retired into their separete compartments. Tomarrow, they'd be in New York city, Dot would be married to Herbert. She smiled as she looked out the window at the many stars, the train tracks lolled her to sleep.

She suddenly woke up, not knowing what woke her up, her heart beat widely.
What had woken her up?
 She threw her blanket off her and slipped on her bathrobe, finding her way to the door, she peeked out.

Then she realized, the train had stopped!
She stepped out into the hall to see what was the problem. And somone was running by, knocking her over. She screamed. and fell to the floor.

to be continued..

2 comments:

  1. LOVE it!!!!! So exciting!!! Oh, and the character pics are so neat! Dot is sooo pretty :-) Is the pic of Tip Gregory Peck?

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  2. I'm glad you like it.
    and I'm not sure if Tip is Gregory Peck

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